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Imagine that we ate an orange
and spit the seeds into our hands
drinking a cup of coffee
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But instead of hair you wear fire
and joke about the ghosts and planets
you aspire to, inhabit or conflate.
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I watch the flames grow dense
and spiral away in the dark;
a spark, a flicker and then nothing.
Beautiful poem, jon. i came here today looking for your vietnam project but had to comment on this first. On the page it clicks through to, the last line is a separate stanza. i think it works better as the last line of the 3rd 3 line stanza. for what it’s worth, my 2 bits.
Done!