http://lastbender.com/poetry/untitled/ The Website of Author Jon Frankel Fri, 03 Sep 2010 13:43:42 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 http://lastbender.com/poetry/untitled/comment-page-1/#comment-586 jonfrankel Thu, 29 Jan 2009 18:41:37 +0000 http://lastbender.com/?p=235#comment-586 Done! Done!

]]> http://lastbender.com/poetry/untitled/comment-page-1/#comment-585 John Thu, 29 Jan 2009 17:20:04 +0000 http://lastbender.com/?p=235#comment-585 Beautiful poem, jon. i came here today looking for your vietnam project but had to comment on this first. On the page it clicks through to, the last line is a separate stanza. i think it works better as the last line of the 3rd 3 line stanza. for what it's worth, my 2 bits. Beautiful poem, jon. i came here today looking for your vietnam project but had to comment on this first. On the page it clicks through to, the last line is a separate stanza. i think it works better as the last line of the 3rd 3 line stanza. for what it’s worth, my 2 bits.

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