Comments on: Roy Liked To Laugh http://lastbender.com/fiction/roy-liked-to-laugh/ The Website of Author Jon Frankel Wed, 18 Jan 2012 13:50:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: jonfrankel http://lastbender.com/fiction/roy-liked-to-laugh/comment-page-1/#comment-137 jonfrankel Thu, 14 Aug 2008 23:40:03 +0000 http://lastbender.com/?p=155#comment-137 I just couldn't make it work as a novel with that for the first sentence. It's the best first sentence, no doubt, but it changes the story. I just couldn’t make it work as a novel with that for the first sentence. It’s the best first sentence, no doubt, but it changes the story.

]]> By: miette http://lastbender.com/fiction/roy-liked-to-laugh/comment-page-1/#comment-135 miette Thu, 14 Aug 2008 22:07:38 +0000 http://lastbender.com/?p=155#comment-135 I dunno. It'd be a great first sentence, no fooling, but that might move it a little too squarely into the domain of Roy's Book. It's Alex's book, and to be so, has to start with books. But actually, I've always rallied for the creation of a Roy book. I dunno. It’d be a great first sentence, no fooling, but that might move it a little too squarely into the domain of Roy’s Book. It’s Alex’s book, and to be so, has to start with books.

But actually, I’ve always rallied for the creation of a Roy book.

]]> By: jonfrankel http://lastbender.com/fiction/roy-liked-to-laugh/comment-page-1/#comment-133 jonfrankel Wed, 13 Aug 2008 19:24:03 +0000 http://lastbender.com/?p=155#comment-133 You may be right. We'll see. You may be right. We’ll see.

]]> By: Eric Maroney http://lastbender.com/fiction/roy-liked-to-laugh/comment-page-1/#comment-132 Eric Maroney Wed, 13 Aug 2008 13:37:44 +0000 http://lastbender.com/?p=155#comment-132 I still think it should be the first sentence, even after all these years. I still think it should be the first sentence, even after all these years.

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